Daily Deviation
Given 2010-03-30
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pikminAAA: "It's a killer character concept! A wonderful translation from the original form of the jellyfish into something unique. Certainly an instant fave." (
Suggested by =Elixia-Dragmire and Featured by
`majnouna )
Firstly I want to say that the way you made this picture is extreamly effective, the fushia's, deep pinks, light oranges and light blues stand out wonderfully against the deep blue of the ocean. The idea is wonderfuly creative to and I aplaude you for that as some artists are not very original. The way the character is posed is great for this type of scene, its gracefull and natrual so it looks like she is swiming through the water while gazing up to where the light shines through the water.
The veils on the humaniod gellyfish are wonderfully done and arn't rigid so that they look like they are paper or cardboard.
If I was to say how to improve on this I would say that the bottom left hand side is a little cluttered and it should look more spaced out but not organised in lines. And also the jellyfish second from the top looks a little squashed. But I'm not criticising, only I know many people want to know how to improve instead of whats good about it.
I was immediatly drawn to this picture and every fav you get for it is well deserved.
Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to seeing wonderful peices of art like this in the future.
(Also I hope this was a fair critique)
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